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XXXI

Fri Nov 14, 2003, 11:34 PM
November 11, 2003

To whom it may concern...
Mesmerized by the trailing lights
That follow behind busy actions
But dull thoughts.
Break free of the vines that
Lace you with despair.
Lay motionless in the open
Breathing in the smooth air.
The scent of your hair alone
Travels so far that it breaks
Me down from here.
Latch onto my wings
Let me take you for a ride
That you will never forget
showing you wonders out there
That only few perceive with acceptance.
“The world is your”
bow down for no-one
including yourself
more important
those who help gather the moss
that covers your heart.
Break
Break free
before it’s too late

- Jordan

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  • Current Residence: West Babylon, New York
  • Interests: music, writing, movies, reading, politics, religions
  • Favourite movie: Peter Pan
  • Favourite band or musician: The Frames
  • Favourite artist: Botticelli
  • Favourite poet or writer: Ethan Hawke, Stephen King
  • Favourite cartoon character: Jem of "Jem and the Holograms"
  • Personal Quote: "I shall eclipse you . . ."

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:iconbloodykisses05:
Guess what......YOU HAVE BEEN HUGGED! Spread the love around! Pick any of your friends who you think don't get much love and, HUG THEM! (you can copy and paste this message on their userpage!)

RULES:
1- You can hug the person who hugged you!
2- You can hug the same person as many times as you see fit!
3- You -MUST- spread the love people! At least 1 hug!
4- You should hug in public! Paste it on their user page so they feel loved!
5- Random hugs are perfectly okay!
6- Please, don't worry about same gender hugging, it's a love hug!
7- You should most definitly get started hugging right away!
Remember, this is about showing love to your fellow peeps! Everybody should get a hug
*this da love was started by ~ lady-alessandra and ~ Godscrossingsandevil

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:iconbloodykisses05:
you rock my dear. if you want me to help you get around or figure out DA, just ask. i have only been on here for a little over a year, but i have had wonderful tutors! btw, your poetry kicks much ass. :hug: love ya bree...

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:iconwanderingjizo:
i like your stuff, and you live near my hometown... awesome

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:iconsonnets:
thank you . . . you left me a comment a million years ago, i never saw it, so a delayed thank you. i enjoy your stuff, too, although i can't add the "close to my town" comment anymore, because i moved back to new york last month. sigh.
:iconpixalias:
Holy canoly, this is fantastic. it has great flow and originality and the subject is great...it really takes you rfor a ride...well done...and i see that you are from myrtle beach as well from geourl, good to meet ya.

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:iconsonnets:
thank you so much. you left me a comment a long time ago, and i never saw it until now. i really appreciate it. i can't say that i live in myrtle beach anymore (actually, i lived in florence, lol), because i've moved back to new york now. ugh.

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